Sapphire of the Fairies by Richard S. Tuttle
Great!
Sapphire of the Fairies is certainly straight into the action! I liked the indirect thoughts behind characters, e..g. ‘…he didn’t stand for unregistered guests…’ thus, creating instant knowledge of who, what & where etc. – a particularly good way of giving the reader insight into the personality. I’m not sure if I ‘like’ the innkeeper but your style makes it easy to ‘know’ him. Good information without being boring. A prolific writer, as seen by the amount of work uploaded.
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Cross Your Heart by Ria Lu
Regal.
Straight into the action, the story has a regal epic feel.
I liked phrases like ‘…eighteen summers…’ to give age.
Full of grandeur.
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